The Waners sat to one side of the storm shelter. Peter Kacey's Dad held is arms round his three girls, Sanurita, Kacey's Mum, Kacey herself, and Paige, Kacey's younger sister. Above, the storm was raging, they could hear huge thumps as trees hit he ground, The sound of gushing water from he river, all along with a heavy swirling sound, which they new was he tornado.
Kacey thought back to the face she saw, crouching, eyes wide like she was about to go yet, when she had looked at Kacey, her eyes had grown wide, as though she had recognised her from somewhere, though Kacey was sure she had never met her.
"Mum?" Paige asked her voice waving a bit.
"Yes sweet heart?" Sunurita said softly.
"Will this storm end?" She said even more shaken.
"I don't...." Sunurita began.
The noise of the storm grew louder as the pothole was opened and a young girl stepped into he shelter.
As Francesca turned Kacey's heart slid.
The girl from before, looking at her with that horrible look her eyes wide in recognition, a steel knife in her hand.
7 comments:
awesome dudes! it is so cool!yeah ...
eeeek! absolutly brilliant!!!
Wonderful, absoulutely wonderful.
hang on - this is great - but is it your writing or from the site you listed as a reference?
MINE!!!
All writing on my blogs is my own!
Hehehehe I guess you make normal misakes!
it is really well written kittykat!
you continue to impress others!
don't forget about furbies!
pim:P
This is good, well written with nice scentence structure!!! FINALLY SOMEONE WHO GETS IT!!! Although it IS still rather confusing, so you may need to work on minor details like making it so the reader can UNDERSTAND!!!
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